Looking through the destruction of enduring madness, through eyes that only new sadness,
words flow from the tongue but fall from my chin.
Like a broken iris the illusions became clear, Can they hear me? Can they see me?
I smoke marijuana everyday keeps my thoughts at ease from the mind to decease.
Can’t get a job, loot and rob. Give the community a scare when lives not fair
Blame it on Cameron, Brown and Blair, who are you kidding they don’t care!
I spend my time on a quiet street as corruption falls amongst my feet, flames raw with terror; Mother Nature awakes, like an erupting volcano the riots break.
Go on my fellow, take what you need this is the hour of lawless greed.
Good to see that you've posted this now. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSo that this lasts for nearer the full 5 mins, you'll have to either have a sequence of shots before and after the poem which could set context and conclude, or you instruct the person doing the voice over to slow the pace down and have some gaps between lines, or you repeat some lines, or even the whole poem. Think about whether you could add some shots in (perhaps later) - could you extend the bit about mother nature (images of awakening?). It might be worth having a look at the documentary Life in a Day in college - the early part is imagery of awakenings. How about newspaper images for the politics?
PS - I tried to post this over the weekend, but blogger or my mac wasn't taking the comment.
Don't forget you need to do the 3 tasks to a minimal standard by the end of Friday at 4.10.
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